Body and Mind

I want to feel warm

It's raining now

and I want you to cut me open

like an autopsy

maybe

you'll find something I repress

 

strange

how someone else's pain

makes my own spark

 

I can't imagine

not being, not feeling

in control of your own body

but I can compare

because I know what it's like

to hate everything

and to not feel in control of your

thoughts or emotions

 

streetlamps pass over me as we drive

and somehow I wonder how you'll ever change

Author's Note

pic by createsima on deviantart -> http://createsima.deviantart.com/art/lamp-30581194?q=boost%3Apopular%20in%3Aphotography%20lamp&qo=1

Reviews

[LScottD]

Much better...spelling, flow short and more focused.