I miss the wind

I miss the wind

A Poem by becca

nothing could prepare me for this
the winds used to sway around the trees
the breeze was music to my ears
it followed me sweetly through the rhythm
the wind is quiet
it used to flow around my fingertips
a cool feeling surrounded my limbs
consuming me
keeping me safe
it guided me
i've lost my compass
maybe that's okay
i can't see clearly
i want to see and feel again
why can't i see through
maybe its just me
what's it like to have it
i can't even remember
i'm still cold
alone
i want the wind to come back
too late

© 2020 becca


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This is a poem about loss. The wind is a symbol for something the speaker once treasured but is no longer available. The last line makes it sound as though the loss is irrevocable. On the other hand, maybe the wind has assumed another form, and the speaker needs to be flexible enough to recognize it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a poem about loss. The wind is a symbol for something the speaker once treasured but is no longer available. The last line makes it sound as though the loss is irrevocable. On the other hand, maybe the wind has assumed another form, and the speaker needs to be flexible enough to recognize it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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