...

 

...

 

Sittin here waiting

for the times to change.

 

he says he likes me but

she, ha shes beautiful.

 

he told me i am everything he needs

& the only thing he wants

but SHE is in the way.

 

sittin here waiting

for the times to change.

 

walking past me

i think maybe he will speak

but nope thats not the case

i am once looked over again

 

he smiles

i laugh

he says i try to hard

but i promise i care more than her

if only he could see.

 

sittin here waiting

for the times to change.

 

I want his attention

but i dont know how.

 

man how i wish he never came.

 

sittin here waiting

for the times to change.

 

Author's Note

Uhm i dont really write alot and i am not that great at it but i love to do it i hope this isnt to bad i just kind of pulled it from my head..after the few weeks i have had great feelings but dont know how to express it through writing.=D

Reviews

[Fallen Angel]

The truth behind this is more then you could know. I hate it when you like a boy but they can't see that you are the one who is right for them.

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

wow corbin!

You put FlaVOr in this! And who says you can't write??? this is awesome. unfortunately most people know how this feels, and I could personally relate to this, which is good. It's always nice to be able to make a connection with someone through the intoxicating words of a poem. You also had a nice flow I must say! This painted out a picture for me, which was filled with blues, reds, yellows, pinks, and purples; all drenched in sorrow. you have a gift, and even if some people don't like your stuff, it doesn't matter, you should write for yourself! great job! i can't wait to see more!!!XD

peace,

~may

[That Weirdo You Just Mi..]

awwww Corbin! You rock my socks off. How could you not feel the emotion when writing this? You are a really good writer and should add more stuff on here. Happy Birthday! I wuvs yew!