Summer Haiku The Sun

A Poem by buffalosoldier96

The Sun is not what it seems

The Sun smiling at me-
His rays are full of hatred.
Perfect Hatred.

© 2013 buffalosoldier96

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Tate Morgan

I felt that way yesterday when it baked me half to death

Posted 11 Years Ago

Ellie J

An interesting take on summer. I myself hate the summer so it doesn't surprise me that the sun is actually a bitter little thing full of spite. Wonderful haiku!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on July 17, 2013
Last Updated on July 20, 2013
Tags: Sun, smile, Hatred, rays, Haiku, Perfect, Poetry, Summer, he

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buffalosoldier96

Reading, Berkshire, United Kingdom

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Just a guy who loves the english language and it's literature. I also like to "attempt" to try to make poetry because I love reciting and reading it. more..