Elegance

Elegance personified, we ease ourselves into a roadside bistro

Sunlight shrinking your hazel flecked pupils

Our souls interlacing thier tendrils

Reeling from this rushing ecstacy of nirvana

We exchange lace tinted glances whilst holding hands

Across a thousand mile divide, we still connect

For it's moments like these miracles happen

And to think it's only 3 weeks since we met

Yet like snow coloured swans we're forever mated

Joined together as one beneath azure framed skies

You order the steak - rare with iced water

And I slip inside you and concur

For this day has no beginning and no end

Two souls sowing their vision of hope

Writing their screenplay in droplets of love

On tissue thin paper blessed from above

Reviews

[Harrisen Viator]

I like how the imagery of this poem is graceful, I can feel the peace when I read it. Very well written, dude.
Harrisen

[Buddhistboy73]

Cheers bro. Appreciate the review...BB

[Ruth]

I love the surrealness to this, I am going to love your work :)

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey PoppySilver, thanks for stopping by to review "elegance".....it#s appreciated..:)
BB

[Ruth]

Most welcome and thank you too!

[Relic]

There's nothing like a good detailed poem to guide us along. I like the scenario you've set up and the various images that are infused within each stanza. This is very good writing, I'm envious of your talent. Great stuff.

[Buddhistboy73]

Many thanks for stopping by my friend,....it's appreciated.
BB

[Relic]

My pleasure.

[Tate Morgan]

Ah young love it hurts to even think of it lol I can say we all know this feeling some of us oh too well Very nice

[Buddhistboy73]

Hi Tate. Thanks for taking the time to review....:)
BB

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome

[redflutterby]

I love the whole poem but the last four lines are pure heaven!! Beautiful emotion! :-)

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey my friend. Thanks for stopping by to review...:)
BB

[Eric Cox]

Nicely done imagery and romance. Good to read. Nice pen upon this.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You have weaved a dreamy cloud of reverie...one in which I can feel the enchanting connection between the miles....

"Joined together as one beneath azure framed skies" ~ truly a lovely scenario you have built in my mind.
So romantic!... loved this piece,BB...I can read this over and over again.~xo~

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey Robbie. Many thanks for the kind review (as always). Yeah, I can feel the connection too....and I enjoyed writing this piece. BB

[Robbie~xoxo~]

and I enjoyed reading this piece... Lovely write!~xo~:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

This was a joy to read and has appealled to all of my senses..

I can taste your words as they melt in my mind. I can see how you perceive the essence of beauty by the way you have conveyed your words with dignity. I can smell the sweetness of your desires overflowing from your quill. I can hear your words loud and clear as they scream from the pages of your heart and I am touched with this insightful intrusion of your soul.

Simply breathtaking my friend......

YB

"Elegance is when the inside is as beautiful as the outside. ~Coco Chanel"

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey YB.
Thanks for stopping by to review...:) Glad you enjoyed....:)
BB

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Hopeful , real, and romantic .

Nicely written poem

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks!

[Storm K.]

This is absolutely, magnificently wonderful. Definitely going into my library! I love how you mirror the elegance you write about in the poem with the way the poem is written - was this done on purpose? Beautiful imagery, incredible word use. You really know how to draw the reader in, manipulate the sentence structures to make a brilliant effect. My only suggestion would be to put in punctuation to keep the poem's rhythm, such as:
"across a thousand mile divide, we still connect"
The comma just gives a good pause.
Great poem! :)

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks for the great review my friend...:) Had fun writing it too. And thanks for the constructive advice too. glad to hear all feedback so I can improve..:)