Elegance

Elegance personified, we ease ourselves into a roadside bistro

Sunlight shrinking your hazel flecked pupils

Our souls interlacing thier tendrils

Reeling from this rushing ecstacy of nirvana

We exchange lace tinted glances whilst holding hands

Across a thousand mile divide, we still connect

For it's moments like these miracles happen

And to think it's only 3 weeks since we met

Yet like snow coloured swans we're forever mated

Joined together as one beneath azure framed skies

You order the steak - rare with iced water

And I slip inside you and concur

For this day has no beginning and no end

Two souls sowing their vision of hope

Writing their screenplay in droplets of love

On tissue thin paper blessed from above

Reviews

[Persona]

Really good. I love the hazel flecked pupils line. I only dislike the 'slip inside you and concur' because 'concur' - I don't know, they agree what exactly? The line is crude compared to the beauty and depth of the rest of the poem, like the swans.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful sweet Poet! Such tenderness in you voice. I love it!

[ewest1220]

Very interesting, I like it!

[Quill~]

Simply enchanting. "Two souls sowing their vision of hope"- lovely words! :)

[Buddhistboy73]

Many Thanks Quill....
'tis appreciated..:)
BB

[JenniferMarie]

beautiful. nice word choices and imagery.

Thank you,
Jen

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey Jen,
Thanks for stopping by....:) And glad you enjoyed the poem.....:)
I'll check your words soon....
BB

[sasha]

This poem and Waves I now have read, they both are written in a major key, and it impresses me, and that is my very positive response!

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey Sasha. Thank You for stopping by to review my poem. I'm not sure what it means major key, but glad you had a positive response...:) Take care....
BB

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such a perfect way of penning the joining of two souls. I love the part where you write about it only being 3 weeks since we met, because I believe that when two people are truly connected time has no boundary. There is a palpable emotional quality to this write that really got to the heart of me. The imagery is fantastic, and the flow was amazing. Nicely done!

[Buddhistboy73]

Thank You my friend...:)

[DaniElle LaPointe]

What is with you and lace? Just askin.... INTERLACING, LACE.... it is also in your poem good evening sugar.... ;)

Makes me ponder the significance of lace in our culture... Both as fashion and decor.

:D

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey DaniElle....many thanks for your lacy review....:) And I hope that your worktop is resplendent with glasses of sweet chardonnay....;)
BB

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Worktop.... Lol. :D

[Buddhistboy73]

Well, let me know if you fancy popping over for a glass of finest chardonnay...;)
long flight though! lol.......so you don't like lace then?

[Deuces]

Wow. This is passion, pain, love's expectation all in one. The bittersweet honeymoon stage of new love... nothing can beat it.

Enjoyed this piece, Sir.

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks my friend. It was an enjoyable write too.