Water

Ice, cold, refreshing
The glass glistens with moisture
Good to the last drop

Reviews

[Budd Black]

My original intent was describing a glass of water. It kind of seems redundant to say both Ice and cold, now, but made sense at the time.

[justice]

nice haiku. I would suggest one change maybe. I think that changing the opening line to "Ice-cold, refreshing" I think it picks up the pace of the poem. Just a thought. I really like it as is too! haha. Great write. THanks for sharing it.