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Missing some one badly.

 I went to the doctor
Diagnosed with a broken heart
Always remember you didn't have to tear us apart
The doctor says
The doctor says
I will not last
will not last
unless you stop the bleeding
the bleeding.
Baby I’m sick
Baby I’m sick
and the only cure
 the only cure
the touch of your skin
 touch of your skin
on my barely breathing heart
my last request
my last request before i disappear
remember the days we wasted on the pier.
Baby I’m sick
baby I’m sick
and the only cure
the only cure
the touch of your skin
your skin
on my barely breathing heart
My last request
last request on this burning day

remember the promises
made on that cold winter day
As I lie awake lie awake your sleeping comfortably
when I fade will you still remember me?
baby Im sick
baby I’m sick
and the only cure
the only cure
the touch of your skin
touch of your skin
on my barely breathing heart
Ill call your name
your name
till i  grow weak
grow weak
so hard to speak
so hard to speak
I hear no reply
no reply
except the wicked wind
the wicked wind
dancing in the dark
the dark
baby I’m sick
and the only cure
the touch
touch of your skin
on my barely breathing heart
baby I’m sick.

Reviews

[James Hamilton]

The repetitions produce an great effect. Enjoyed reading this poem.