one

one

left to fight the pain

one

to wonder why

one

left to cry each night

one

wishing to end the fight

 

one

hearing this silent scream

one

who wants to make it die

one

who wonders where all life went

one

 who wonders where God is

 

it was all here

the glass was full

the heart fulfilled

it all changed

within a week or two

the world fell down

and there was

one

one

one

Reviews

[zainul]

Dramatically expressed events of life.
Enjoyed it.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

kinda sad! I actually really like the poem but I don't think the way you set it up is to flattering maybe you should try different style. But as faw as the actual content of the poem? no, i wudnt change a thing!