Lonely

idk

A day went by

A night faded

I cant stop crying

of the harsh words u used

I wont stop crying because i am truly hurt

u call me the things im really not

but yet u still call to say good night or good morning

im sorry

for everything...

i can never make things right

all this drama u cause me

i can never make it go away

because life alwayz makes more in my world

for one i stand alone

for two i scar myself

and three well everyone says the third time is the charm

so plz tell me what three is,in this lost nd lonely world.

where we fight for freedom when it was the man who gave that to us

i cry and cry for things that are of no importance.

Maybe,just maybe my last tear will be for myself nd nothing more.

Reviews

[ayele marie dalmeida]

i feel truly connected to this piece because i have wrong someone i truly cared about and even if i i was sorry , i know it can never go back. nicely said :)

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Baby,

Editting is your friend. And we are writers to use "U" instead of you...well...

Always,

Matthew
A.

[Squishy]

Uhh...Thx For Sharing :P