Clarissa

srry for the review

r u mad at me cuz im like you   everything in a different point of view  

a single word and i can feel your rage holding back  pretending just a page

hearing you sound so bold;  knowing  island nightmares we probably both hold

for me or for you doesnt matter if its true    

 and im sorry ive offended you

Reviews

[Joy Ann]

Wow, Clarissa doesnt' seem like a very nice person to make those nasty comments about what someone else has written. Seems like this forum is a place for people to write what they feel or think and I never heard that you needed to get someone's permission to use a persons first name in any writing. She was clearly not identified until she wrote those nasty comments on this writer's page, so she must have wanted the attention which she brought on herself.

[Clarissa]

Honestly, Joy Ann, I have a comment on my page that said bubblefet wrote me the poem. And honestly, I hate attention. So before you start saying that I wanted to bring attention to myself, maybe you should actually think that I was stating my opinion about a poem that really is about me.

[Joy Ann]

I just went to the your page and didn't find anything that was posted there but even if there were, it seems like that might have been the place to voice your concern.

[Clarissa]

That's because I deleted the work that it was posted on because I decided to go in a different direction. But thanks for your concern about my attitude and that I should keep my opinions to myself. I will keep myself in check next time, just for you.

[Clarissa]

Oh and here is the quote just for you: "made a poem for you at least out of our discussion you inspired me named it after ya ill change that if you want but its like a sorry in the best way i can"

[Clarissa]

You don't have to take down the poem although I don't appreciate someone I don't know and have never met writing something so personal about me and telling ME that they are like me when they have no idea what has happened in my life.
I write because I don't talk about how I feel. I have better wording when I write something down unless I am with the person that I love. That person is the only one who can get my fears and my secrets out of me. All I was doing, was trying out a new idea and a new site because my stories have adult content.
And I don't have nightmares anymore. If they pop up, I know how to control them. So, we don't share anything.

[Dana]

I think that the rhyming adds to your poem and I think it's really interesting. The first line, with the slang writing, really drew me in right away. Very interesting