magician

slight of hand

if your reading this and catch some verse where it seems not right

your right  there probably was something there that is now out of sight

i dont know you enough to trust ; leaving these feelings to a stranger?

im not one to put myself in constant danger

knowing you could crush me with a single critique

my past in your hands ?   it would just make me feel weak

so ill do my best to fill in the missing piece

and you might still catch glimmers of my beast

 

Author's Note

just felt like this when i started drowning writing my stories grabbin on to generic but sometimes i let it slip out (i do my best not to b crazy)

Reviews

[AllisonB]

I really enjoyed this. I've been searching and searching for an interesting poem. I love your word play. Please continue to write. (I figure that you are aware of the lack of capitalization.)

[RomaJ]

Bubblefet, your poems always seem to catch my eye. Great work! Hahahaa I feel you on this.:) I'm crazy too as far as my writings goes. I don't know where it all comes from, it must b all in my head, don't read too much in to what I say, I might b already dead lol But this is a masterpiece:)