checking out

blown

I failed and let the burden show
But you, my heart will never know
The weight I tried to lift wasn't meant to be adrift
Now stirred and freed, the scariest part is yet to be seen

I wish I could shrug and let it go
But my heart felt what we thought I couldn't know
Here I am holding on tight
To any chances of a maybe or a might 

Author's Note

plz dont

Reviews

[Niall Madden]

While I liked the idea the spelling mistakes and punctuation (I am assuming were intentional) let it down but its a good idea just refine and explore it more in-depth.