Content Warning

Content Warning

A Poem by bubbafreesnake

Nudity, sex, smoking. 

Who cares?


Smoking was never his thing,

But it didn't bother him either.


His significant other had smoked.


After they were married

He noted the prize stacked up behind her trumpeting

Addiction, domination, bondage, wah wah wah

In a coronation photograph of Miss Montclair.

What happened to the 'lifetime of cigarettes,'” he had asked?
“I smoked the
m-- all,” she said sweetly.

© 2022 bubbafreesnake


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waddayagonnado!? eh? a fault he accepted for a lifetime ... such irony in her humorous reply .. "I smoked them-- all" .. i like the underlying parody about warnings the go without heeding .. there is a price to be paid :(
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bubbafreesnake

3 Months Ago

That's how it has been for me, anyway. Thanks for the comment, Bubba.
i really liked this piece.
a coexisting. symbiotic life together.
{both loving the other. as they are.}

Posted 11 Months Ago


bubbafreesnake

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the review, living lavender, Bubba.
I've never seen a happy union of smoker and non smoker

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bubbafreesnake

2 Years Ago

I agreed with your remark, Ciara, until I realized that the only couple, I knew that stayed together.. read more
Ciara

2 Years Ago

Well I said happy Union not lasting union. :)
But I suppose it's also true that love is blin.. read more
Pretty good story. Thank you so much

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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bubbafreesnake

1 Year Ago

Thank you Heravinluca.
Bubba
Very well written, thought provoking as well,
My ex husband smoked but i didn't and well i don't know how i managed to escape that,
I enjoyed this write....

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bubbafreesnake

1 Year Ago

Thanks Lessa, Bubba.

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Added on January 3, 2022
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