Not Getting Over

Another song about an ex GF

you said i was everything you could ever ask for, everything and more. we best friends for a time, then you became all mine. it always you, always on my mind, the best girl i could ever find, someone id never want to erase and find no need to replace

that must be the reason why i still cry, and cant seem to get by, it must be the reason why im still cold and freezing and dreaming of of your face, left with no answer why, just goodbye,and now im two months older but im not getting over.

four years and six months you decided i was too much, now im just getting drunk passing the time trying to rewind all that we had, but wont listen, and im stuck just missing what we were, and how i swore we perfect but you said it just wasnt worth it

so that must be the reason why still cry, and cant seem to get by, it must be the reason why im still cold and freezing and dreaming of of your face, left with no answer why, just goodbye,and now im two months older but im not getting over.

im not over you its easy to tell, just going through hell, i thought you were innocent, and sweet i thought youd make me complete,

so that must be the reason why, that must be the reason why, the reason why that im not getting over.

Author's Note

Honest opinion of what you think, pick out a line you like the best and let me know.
Thanks,
Brandon

Reviews

[Margie F]

Oh, I have been THERE! My favorite line is "I'm not over you it's easy to tell, just going through hell." There are some grammatical issues here that make a couple of places a little difficult to read, but the point you're trying to convey is very clear. I'm sorry you lost this one. It sounds like you felt she was very special.

[watch_the_world]

I love this. Been there done that. Sucks. I like how its talking about how you are two month older but you arent over and then in the next stanza it fast forwards. I think if you added another stanza that would make it a lot better :D But it flowed really well :D Keep it up :D

[Brandon]

Thanks Margie, i know i suck with the grammatical stuff but i kinda just write a lot in a night and just throw them up, or save them to my computer without thinking too much about them.