scene from and unfinished screen play.

this is a flashback to when the main character is going to propose to his girlfriend, she was since passed away and he is in the middle of a drinking binge during this flashback.

Driver
How are we this morning, Calvin.

CAL
She called me Calvin ya know?

DRIVER
I know, I drove you two around enough times to remember.

CAL
I'm drunk.

The Driver turns around and starts to drive, the diner where CAL sees TAYLOR taking and order. The car drives past a park with an empty swing set, CAL closes his eyes.

flashback to

park daytime- 6 months earlier

MEGAN and CAL are sitting on two different swings neither one of them are moving they are just looking at each other, deeply in love. CAL starts to smile.

MEGAN
What are you smiling at?

CAL
Just you.

MEGAN
Shut up what is it?

CAL jumps off his swing and walks away from the wood chip area, and onto some grass. He turns around and looks back at MEGAN.

CAL
Remember our first date, you said it wouldn't work because I'm too goofy for you, and you needed someone more serious?

MEGAN nods and gets off her swing and starts to walk over to CAL.

MEGAN
Yeah I remember.

CAL
How bout the time when we made me and you actually official and you told me it wouldn't work because, we're too different?

MEGAN starts to look a little bit nervous and grabs a hold of CAL'S hand almost for protection, bracing herself for bad news.

MEGAN
I do, what's this all about.

CAL stops walking and lets go of MEGAN'S hand and looks her in the eyes.

CAL
I was just wondering, what your excuse for never getting married would be.

CAL pulls a ring out of his pocket and drops to one knee. Leaving MEGAN standing crying and nodding.

Author's Note

just want to know what you think of the dialogue, if any big errors glare at you please let me know.
Thanks,
Brandon