Longing

Foolish Young Love Mush

As the night waits for the morning sun

Do I in earnest await to hear from you

Away from you I'd never run

The amount of love I have.. If only you knew

Below the ocean surface

As deep as this my love for you abounds

With you I feel of more purpose

If you want me to explain, forever on this I could expound

Give me your heart once again

This time I want it forever to keep

For mine, you don't need to win

It's always been within your reach

Nothing would bother me

If it were for you

Don't you see?

We're meant to be, its true.

Author's Note

Date of creation unknown. It's pretty old.

Reviews

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Just beautiful but sad when the one we feel a deep love and connection for might not realise - I guess some things just take time and being open about your love can safe a live mesnt go be because if words are left unsaid we might lose the love that was meant to be- wonderful words🌹

[Jas]

This is great, I love the devotional tone and the way it fills my chest with the same feelings described. Very well written

[Dinesh Kumar]

nicely written really enjoyed reading

[BlackPrince]

'As the night waits for the morning sun...'
I love that image. I can literally picture the night waiting patiently for the morning sun.

'Below the ocean surface,
as deep as this my love abounds;
with you I feel of more purpose;
if you want me to explain, forever on this I could expound.'

That says it all.
words can't explain love. It's beyond what eyes see.

well done

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and thoughts. When love is near. We need to hold and caress every night. I liked the feel of longing and the needs of the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I liked the energy of your words.
Coyote

[Lavi]

It's also pretty good. I got a lot of old works myself but it's always nice to post anyway. Thanks for sharing your heart (or more accurately)/ soul.

[lessa (kenzie)]

This is wonderful, very well written

[E.A. Spain]

awe thanks!