Lone Wolves Love

8th poem I wrote

 

As a lone wolf howls

Yet there lies another

Laying on the rock near the lake

It too is howling

 

Lit by the full moon singing its sad song

It moves on through the night

All it wants is someone to take care of it

All it wants is some love

 

So it wonders off into the night

Never again to be seen

There is no more howling in this forest

No more loneliness is here

 

But in the far off distance

A howling melody of love is heard

The lone wolves are no more

They have found one another

They have found their love

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

Be careful to avoid too many "its"...or, if writing a personal poem, too many "I"s and "my"s etc.

"Lit by the full moon, singing its sad song,
the wolf moves on through the night.
All it wants is someone to take care of it;
All the wolf wants is some love." (still a few too many of the same words, but at least you can alternate between wolf and it).

I like how you've placed the concept of love into different surroundings, using wolves as characters instead of humans.

Nicely done.
As always, i suggest a bit of punctuation...but you're probably sick of that by now? Lol.

Thanks for posting this.