She Is

26th poem

  She's amazing
But doesn't believe it

She's amazing
And doesn't perceive it

She wakes up and looks in the mirror
And yells so everyone can hear her

She yells of fury
because deep down she's mad

She yells of fury
because deep down she's sad

Without you
She's fallen apart

Without you
She's lost her heart

But don't worry

I'm helping her recover
From all the pain you caused her

But now

She says she's not good enough
and I have to tell her she is

But now

She says she's not good enough
when really, she is 

 

Reviews

[Lillian]

Bryce, this is still. My favorite. I always think about it.

[Lillian]

heeeey ya fixxed it!! bueno!!!

PS. i g2g. but i'll call u in a bit w. someone's phone. ok?

[Lillian]

im re-reviewing it because im going to say it again. love. love. love. this. the pink is a nice touch. =)

oh, but go back and look at your "public profike" and look at this. it looks like there are a thousand spaces between the last word and the bottom of the page. *like it takes forever to scroll down.

[Lillian]

i love this. love. love. love.

kinda makes me cry a bit on the inside.