Take Me

Take Me

A Poem by Bryanna

i just want something that takes me,
makes it difficult and simple;
all in one breath.
I just need someone to take me,
farther than I've been,
farther than i am now,
oh please show me how,
how.

Take me by the hand,
guide me through these woods,
just ignore the crackling,
just ignore the sounds.
we can go further,
we can go deeper,
deeper than these streams,
just say the words.

Run away with me,
no postcards or boundaries,
we can stop wherever,
or fly higher up the tree.
follow through the forest,
pick up your feet,
just over the glacier,
there's so much more to see.

Take me by the hand,
guide me through these woods,
just ignore the crackling,
just ignore the sounds.
we can go further,
we can go deeper,
deeper than these streams,
just say the words,
and we'll leave.

© 2017 Bryanna


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I enjoyed the adventure as I read this piece. Great job!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Few are as confident/vulnerable to go on such a journey with another, but when it works it's magical. A nice piece. Thanks.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Don't we all wish to just leave and explore the unknown? You did a fantastic job capturing the desire to want to go out and explore the world that awaits. I enjoyed this piece very much.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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we all want those woods. i really enjoyed this. there is an honest, deep beauty in your thoughts & words. nice job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful use of words and thoughts.
"we can go further,
we can go deeper,
deeper than these streams,"
The above lines. Words, a lover want to hear. Thank you Bryanna for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bryanna

7 Years Ago

thank you!
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome Bryanna.
"just say the words" i'm not planning on saying them, just curious, what are the words?

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on May 24, 2017
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Bryanna
Bryanna

B.C., Canada



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