My Day in Wonder

My Day in Wonder

A Poem by Bryan_Himmel
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This was written up as a June challenge within the group "Poetry,Stories, and Any Other Scribbles"

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Red Queen, Red Queen
why are you after me?
how much of the truth do you gleam?

Tweedle Dee, Tweedle Dee
stop trying to arrest me
for in your arrogance, you set me free

Alice, Alice
Please empty your chalice,
so I can show you a world with no malice.

Caterpillar, Caterpillar
do you have something to smoke?
for I have many a dream to unfold.

Mad Hatter, Mad Hatter
could you share some tea,
and teach me to embrace insanity?

Cheshire, Cheshire
oh won't you smile for me?
take me to the places I cannot see

White Rabbit, White Rabbit
have you the time to frolic with me?
for I fear I haven't a single place to be.

© 2013 Bryan_Himmel


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Nice and lyrical, you could keep going with this one. My fave bit was the white rabbits

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bryan_Himmel

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I may have to take the time one day and re-visit this one to add more.
Delightfully whimsical and melancholy! I like the theme, my favorite stanza being the mad hatter :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bryan_Himmel

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I dare say the Hatter line is my favorite as well. I wanted to stretch my bound.. read more

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Bryan_Himmel
Bryan_Himmel

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I dabble in poetry, lyrics, and the occasional story. Have been writing on and off for a few years now, I am a bit of an self-turned introvert due to things that have occurred thus far in life. My wr.. more..

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