It's Perfect

Life haven't been so good at me.
Struggles so hard.
Failures too painful.
Sadness so tough.

I've tried to understand,
Life wasn't perfect.
Sorrow and failure,
little parts of it.

This heart I have,
hardened as diamond.
Strong indeed,
and hard to be broken into pieces.

But remember my friend,
Even diamonds can be broken.
Hard may be soften,
and difficult may be eased.

After all, I realized,
Struggles and Challenges
make Life perfect.
For a diamond not polished
is precious yet IMPERFECTLY adorable.

Life?
Yes! It's perfect.


-bryandc15

Author's Note

The pronoun 'it' pertains to Life.

Sorry, I wrote this while I'm in a certain dilemma. It's what we're calling writer's block. So please bear with me. Thank you:)

Reviews

[KurKota]

I think this is uses transition very well. From at first expressing sorrow, and evolving it though to contentment and even joy... very nice !

[bryandc15]

Thank you.

[Rhianne Ney]

The poem is well weaved and the description was well made. Very great!
100/100

[bryandc15]

Thank you

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[gombeggar]

i think it comes off fine...but there is some verb usage in the 1st 2 stanzas u need to fix

[Timeless-Chan]

Diamonds, it's an analogy I use when I think of my writing. Every story starts like a diamond out of the ground. it may be rough and not perfect but with a nice cutting and polishing it can turn out into a very beautiful piece of work. I like this outlook on life that you gave... good work! Keep it up!

~Dreamer!

[bryandc15]

Thank you Dreamer.

[kublakhan27]

An uplifting and well-written piece :)

[bryandc15]

Thank you. But in your perception, wasn't this piece written without passion? I mean was it really nice? I'm just wandering.

[kublakhan27]

I thought it was passionate, the way it began on a downcast note and grew increasingly optimistic as it went along...

[bryandc15]

Thank you:) I'm just not that confident if I'm really going to write this here in writerscafe. Thank you:)

[kublakhan27]

No problem, you're doing just fine :)

[Elizabeth Carter]

Love!!!:) too many forget the simple message you portray in this poem! I love the way you wrote it:)

[bryandc15]

Thank you Elizabeth.