I'm not alone

I'm not alone

A Poem by bryandc15

True Happiness is measured not
with the acquisition of luxuries we want.
True Happiness is measured not
with the power which everyone desires.

The bliss I had
passed for good.
When sorrow found me
and stayed too long.

Four corners of the room
summoned as my witnesses.
With this terrible sadness
And unending loneliness.

Tomorrow is not
another day to meet.
For this sorrowful night
doesn't seem to leave.

Since then, I've thought
I'm not alone
But eventually I saw,
I was living on my own.

This dark sadness I feel,
hindered the reality.
I'm not alone
God is with me.

© 2013 bryandc15


Author's Note

bryandc15
I wrote this piece while I'm in my room last night, alone. Then suddenly I thought "Where are everyone?" "Am I alone?" "Did they abandoned me?" . Then, out of the blue I realized " I'm Not " "They didn't" "Someone's around for me" .

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Thank you so much for sharing this with us; I think a lot of people can relate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Sometimes it takes solitude tro truly be aware of God's presence. Great piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
greatly done

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
A beautiful uplifting and inspiring poem. You penned it so well Bryan.

I have sent you a friend request and invitation to our group. Please join us. You can then post this poem in our writing section for more poets to read if you wish.

If you have any problems re this, please let me know.

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I'll sure do post this poem in your group. Thanks for this review:)
The last lines are like the light at the end of the tunnel...just when despair seems poised to take over, comfort arrives...well said :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you my friend:)
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

No problem :)
This is a great poem. I have no criticism. Great Write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
very nice...u r never alone...god is always with u

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
Amazing:) I think everyone needs a reminder now and then that God is always with you, even when nobody else is.

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thanks:)
I'm here::)nicely done

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
yes. You're not alone.

Posted 11 Years Ago


bryandc15

11 Years Ago

Am I not?
mhaie

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on February 1, 2013
Last Updated on February 1, 2013
Tags: Sorrow, Sadness, God

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bryandc15
bryandc15

Legazpi City, Roman Catholic, Philippines



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