Forever Grateful

A poem for God

If I'll be talking to God...

I'll be telling Him how grateful I am.
Grateful that I have a good mother,
a big family, and a group of nice friends.
Grateful that I witnessed the world,
its beauty, its parts.
Grateful that I saw mountains,
tall trees, plentiful animals,and varied people.
Grateful that I encountered trials
which made me firm enough to face more.
Grateful that I've been through obstacles
before reaching success.
Grateful that there is love,
hope, and faith.
Grateful that He had been so good at me.
It's just me who make things worse.
Grateful that there is death to face,
goodbyes too hard.
Grateful that I told Him these
in this simple writing piece.
Grateful that He let me tell this
with no more such ado.
Grateful that to Him
I'll be Forever Grateful.

Author's Note

What are you grateful for? Let me know.

Reviews

[}Echo{]

This is was really good.

I'm thankful for God's grace, and for having the greatest friends in the world who love me for who I am, instead of for who I'm not. :)

[KAOlmsted]

Thank you for the read request; this was nice.

[gombeggar]

yer 1st line is outta synch unless u meant it to be that way...yer words and wording is fantastic and full of spirit and humility...well done

wut am i grateful for? i am grateful that HE stands by us and cares for us in all ways and fashions...and that HE is always there for us...i'm grateful for every new day, every wonderful person i meet either here or in the 'real' world, for so much and stll the littlest things as well...i am grateful that u wrote and shared this poem with us all

[CecilA]

Dear Bryan,

I am grateful for everything you are grateful for. And I am grateful that you shared this beautiful poem with me. Great job!

There is a lot of wisdom, humility, maturity and contentment is this piece.

Suggestions:

'Grateful that He has been so good to me.'
'It's just me who makes things worse.'
'goodbyes too hard.'
'Grateful that I told Him these things
in this simple written piece.'
'Grateful that He let me share this
without much ado.'
'Grateful that because of Him,
I will be Forever Greatful.'

Just see if these ideas help. A couple are grammer corrections. The others might give it better flow. You know me by now. Not criticism.

I continue to look forward to what you have in store for us. I hope all is well with you, your family and college. Are you doing anything special for Christmas?

I hope this review helps.

Cecil