Forever Grateful

A poem for God

If I'll be talking to God...

I'll be telling Him how grateful I am.
Grateful that I have a good mother,
a big family, and a group of nice friends.
Grateful that I witnessed the world,
its beauty, its parts.
Grateful that I saw mountains,
tall trees, plentiful animals,and varied people.
Grateful that I encountered trials
which made me firm enough to face more.
Grateful that I've been through obstacles
before reaching success.
Grateful that there is love,
hope, and faith.
Grateful that He had been so good at me.
It's just me who make things worse.
Grateful that there is death to face,
goodbyes too hard.
Grateful that I told Him these
in this simple writing piece.
Grateful that He let me tell this
with no more such ado.
Grateful that to Him
I'll be Forever Grateful.

Author's Note

What are you grateful for? Let me know.

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

great piece
keep writing!
=]

[CHRIS ANDES]

great piece
keep writing!
=]

[bryandc15]

Thank you.

[lee von cleef]

ah the day blew ,and sky fell ,and I looked for grace, found it there beside the field now covered in mud, lost... the dirt farmer soiled,lunch a bowl of rice steaming,still awaiting him to finish a prayer.

[.......]

wow simply amazing, I am grateful for the Lord almighty, without him my life wouldn't mean nothing. I wouldn't have nothing at all without God. I survived a horrible trauma in which I should be dead. But survived. I owe my life to God.

[bryandc15]

Thanks for another review my friend:)

[bryandc15]

I'm forever Grateful that I have you my friends:)

[chuna]

I'm grateful that you had made this kind of poem!
hope you enjoy writing this piece and hope we all find ourselves with GOD,,,,


are you grateful of having no father? I'm just curious,,,let me know,,,

[bryandc15]

Thanks for your review....
Anyway, from your question I can see that you're a bit curious.... But ....... whatever... Don't know what to say.....

It's not actually grateful.... perhaps it's regret.... Regret that he hadn't seen me as I with my mom had try to live without him... Regret that I can't show him anymore that I'm better of without him........ Life's irony....

[chuna]

thanks for sharing!

I'm grateful!
hope you too for whatever you have and you don't,,

[bryandc15]

yeah... I do...

[mhaie]

Well. You should be grateful! hehe. Anyway, I love it.

[bryandc15]

thanks....

[Jess]

wow:))nice poem bry!!!!keep it up!!!! I have so many things that I am grateful for,it is just that i don't where to start,,lol

[bryandc15]

glad you liked it

[lee von cleef]

If ? Thought transcends and we are talking to God all the time . I think he herd, and yes I too am grateful, for a first world long hot shower.

[kublakhan27]

Not much I could add to this piece really, you've covered it all pretty well...nice work :)