Friends

Friends are those who are really caring

for you as if you are dying.

Friends are those who come near

and wipe away those pains that hide.

 

Friends are someone who were at your side

when your colleagues had left you behind.

Friends are someone who hug you tight,

even if you try to push them away.

 

Friends are precious treasures from above

that should be cared with all our heart.

Friends do belong to our primary needs

to heal our heart of wounds which bleed.

 

Friends are those

who give you what you need.

But never spoil

by giving you what you want.

 

Friends are those who help you first

before solving problems of their own.

Friends are caring hands that pick you up

and put up your pieces that scattered around.

 

Friends are large containers

that hold your heavy problems.

Friends are like flat irons

which neatly smooth out your life's entanglement.

 

Now tell me. Are you one of my friends?

Reviews

[mhaie]

inspiring a. How i wish I've been a good friend to you. Anyway, I love this poem. I can relate myself. Great masterpiece!

[bryandc15]

thanks...

[CecilA]

Dear Bryan,

I love your poem: Friends.

It gets right into the fundamental aspect of friendship: unconditional love.

Here are a couple of suggestions:

Friends do belong to our primary needs
to heal our heart of wounds which bleed.

But never spoil
by giving you what you want.

Friends are those who help you first
before solving problems of their own.
Friends are caring hands that pick you up
and pick up your life's pieces scattered round.

Friends are like large containers
that hold your heavy problems.
Friends are like flat irons
which neatly smooth out your life's entanglements.

Thank you for sharing this great poem with us,

CecilA
This is my

[Admiral Kirk]

Great representation of who friends are. :)

I'm anyone's friend, if they want one. Got problems? You can spill 'em on to me any time, and I won't bug you with mine. :3

[bryandc15]

thanks for review...:)

[Admiral Kirk]

No problem. :)

[Jess]

OF COURSE YES!!!!!I'M ONE OF THEM....thanks for being good to me even though sometimes i'm a little bit,,,you know..hahaha..this is awesome

[bryandc15]

:)

[chuna]

am i?
very good bryan! you had made a great piece,,,
it reminds me of the true friends i had met,,,

[bryandc15]

thanks for your review.... Ho! Ha!

[bryandc15]

hahaha

[chuna]

your welcome!

[bryandc15]

:) (^_^)v

[chuna]

no comment!

[bryandc15]

sorry for some errors that i commit...