Paper Heart-Part II

Even from a distance, she shaped my paper heart.

You drew your dreams

Onto my paper heart

Your every hope

Your every wish

 

My heart was your diary

I would listen to you

On the phone all night

I would keep every call

In my heart

 

My soul was your canvas

What was once a blank soul

An empty soul

Now burns with festive colors

 

Colors, wild and bright

Move me everyday

Shaking me when I forget you

Embracing me when I love you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful. Description and story in your words made the poem a pleasure to read. I like your use of words. Always look forward to reading your poetry.
Coyote

[Tracie Skarbo]

great job on this one too... I really like the image of the colors on the canvas...wonderful

[Danny J.H.]

this is by far the best of the Paper Heart series!!!!!

[EMP]

I really like this, it has beautiful imagery and I like the way you said "you drew your dreams onto my paper heart." really good write :)

[Desert Knave]

I like this very much. It has been a long time since I have felt anyone "draw their dreams" on my heart and you have portryed the feelings so very well. Kudos. ~Jim