Omen

Remorse
regrets
escape
return,
his head in his hands.
Neon lights,
it’s like it’s protecting
itself or something,
you have this look 
like you're keeping 
a secret or something.
Shade, 
what haunts a man's mind 
in the night 
is what rules him.
Give a man freedom of choice 
and you give him temptation.

Author's Note

I'm Italian, sorry for my English :) Thanks!

Reviews

[peacefrog]

Simplistic and true, good read.

[Leo]

Nicely put, short and sweet..the paradox of free will vs. temptation is what separates the believers from the disbelievers..I think faithful men have it easier than the norm..

[Gee]

And give him temptation and the Apple will be gone......Like this Bruna

[Bruna Digregorio]

Thank you for reading! :)

[alifeacoustic]

Wonderfully captured. remorse regret escape return, like a never ending cycle, played on a loop, a loop of temptation and the inevitable folly of finding the loop start again from the beginning.
Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.

[Bruna Digregorio]

However, Humanity has been endowed with the freedom to choose either to obey the true self, or to give in to the temptation of the vanity and materialism of the false-ego.

[alifeacoustic]

Indeed it has. I only wish more saw the consequences of their actions on others.