Time Capsule of Pleasure

Another love poem ...

I am in a time capsule of pleasure … it surrounds me …

Letting me feel my senses more clearly …

The sun shines brighter and mellows my mind…

I am relaxed …

The sea washes the shore … my toes dip into the warm water

A warm summer breeze flows over me ..

Filling my soul with contentment … and thoughts of you …

The garden bench transports me to the distant clouds…

Flying with swifts as they dance in the air …

Making patterns of joy in the sky …..

The silence is soothing .. as the world whispers by …

My hand reaches for yours and the magic begins…

We are transported to the shore …

Our toes digging into the warm sand ….

As we sit under the shade of the palm tree……

Our lives intertwined now … like our bodies…

A maelstrom of passion … rising up like the mountains

Formidable … full of desire and beauty ..

As you are when we make love…

I see your toes curl with anticipation as I enter you ..

Our love fulfilling and complete as we climax as one …

A delight that only true lovers can ever experience…

I feel your breathing .. soft and shallow as you lay in my arms..

Passion spent and tender love soothing us softly …

I want to stay like this forever ….

Feeling your heartbeat send a message of love to mine…

As they mingle like the waters of two mountain streams..

Fresh and ever flowing like our love ….

Today is the continuation of our lives together..

Joy and feelings so deep and so true ….

Forever togetherness a delight to experience…

I see your beauty in my mind … breathtaking …

As each morning when I awake with you in my arms …

The anticipation of the day enhanced by your softness..

My love ever deeper .. ever growing stronger …

I did not live before I met you …

Only now do I feel the completeness of life

Only now do I truly love ….. for eternity …

 

Phil Sanders

23/6/08

Reviews

[Gary H]

I'm struck by vampires after reading this. Probably something to do with the 'eternity' at the end, then re-reading and taking the poem out of the context you have written it in. However, the vampire is also full of love - although mainly lust! - so that makes this pretty curious.
Yet again I'm reminded about where you live. Things are very different in my nearest seaside town... Brighton.....
'A delight that only true lovers can ever experience�' exactly!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Sorry it took so long to review this. What a great love poem, awesome write.

[Angel's Lady]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=e6O7ml0ok9Y

This just feels good. Really terrific thoughts here, Phil...love it!

[Valentine]

God bless..Valentine

[Catrinka]

Phil - your poem transports your reader with you to the beach, the love, all of it. LOVELY! As always, romantic, passionate, touching...you do these so well my friend! Another one for your Romance Collection! Kudo!

[Chelsea Hawkins]

First and foremost, I love romantic pieces. =] They make me smile.
Second of all, I have not been to the beach since I was ten--until now. Your description of the surroundings and beautiful painting of the picture absolutely TOOK me there.

You are very dedicated to your lovely lady. I'm sure she must be full of pride to have you as hers, and to be yours.

[Wildfleour]

Another sweet poem for your sweetie!

[Nicholas Hallows]

This reminded me of these lyrics:

I dig my toes into the sand
The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds
Strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind
Pretend that I am weightless
And in this moment I am happy

You obviously are happy and it shines through your words.

[Ray Hamilton]

Now that's poetry
This was a wonderful write, I enjoyed it very much
But if I keep reading these poems, I will have to find a new girlfriend FAST LOL
Thanks for the pen Ray {Not a Poet}