My Soulmate

A love poem for my lady ....

 

So where do I begin….???

With your radiant smile that lights my heart….

Or the softness of your kisses as like rose petals they shower me with love

Maybe your gentle fingers and the magical way they rouse the passion in me..

Your voice .. as it plays a symphony on my ears …music that ignites my love..

Or the silkiness of your skin as my fingers play a melody of love upon you …

The way you look asleep … contentment written in a glorious sweetness..

As your eyelids flutter softly as my sweet butterfly should …

Or the raging torrent of passion that we create ….

Like the Ride of the Valkyries as its reaches a crescendo …

Followed by the sweet calm of love as we lie together in each others arms…

Walking with my arm around you … such pride I feel at the beauty there beside me..

Or the deep, deep love I feel when I kneel before you and you hold me close to you

A forever love that transcends time and space and is us and us alone ..

In our cocoon of pleasure and desire ….

I want to sing on mountains and shout your name out loud …

Hearing it echo through the years …

For we are an unfinished symphony .. each day writing another passage..

More beautiful notes floating into our memories …

For us alone to feel the depth and feeling of …

You are my life… my forever darling …

My lover .. my soulmate .. my friend …..

Come fill the score with moments of pure joy …

And live the life we both have always dreamed …

 

 

Phil Sanders

7/5/08

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

So where do I begin...???


The beginning line immediately embarks what is a passionate love letter;
so much to be whispered (in her ear),
and so to begin a BEAUTIFUL poem that way will then automatically have the curiousity of the reader,
and then with every word thereafter, so carefully chosen,
and which words have made me become teary-eyed; it is no lie;
for it is perfect and there is nothing that can be taken away from your true feelings,
a reader can only be grateful of being here to hear,
"so where do I begin ...???"

I love this line:

A forever love that transcends time and spaceand is us and us alone

It especially stands out in my recollection of this poem,
which I would love to see you handwrite for her,
as it would be the greatest gift you could ever bestow, besides your already given love; heart.

I like the way you use adjectives to describe your love; and the adverbs, the music, all the things that music does and can and will do; what kind of kisses? Soft, she is your butterfly;
what kind of smile, radiant, like the poem itself;
what kind of torrent of passion do they share? -Raging- their love is a fire that burns, a light that never goes out:

For we are an unfinished symphony

to be led to those same mountains,

I want to sing on mountains and shout your name outloud ...
Hearing it echo through the years ...


wow!

You have painted such a pretty image, of such a prettyheart man being so kind, so tender, so gentle,
showing her his deep, deep love,
and that song reverberates and rings through listening ears,
to the heartbeat first, then eyes, then words, and tears,
joyous,
overflowing,
bringing the present to the future,
making memories that will last and be cocooned in their love.

What a beautiful love letter.
You should be proud of the writer you are.

I am.
Of you.

[Valentine]

Phil, this is beautiful and I bet [C] loves it..I like the part of being on the mountain and your loves song echoing throughout time..loving someone is loving them when they look their best and still thinking their beautiful when fresh out of bed,,no make up..hair a mess..and needing a good tooth brushing..I am thankful you have found this ny friend,,God bless you both..valentine

[Fran Marie]

A lovely write of Soulmate Love ~ Beautifully expressed emotions thru~out

and so very well penned~very Nice indeed!~

Fran Marie

[Candle in the wind]

I am glad you have experienced such an all encompassing emotion and not love's sad satiety or even worse the pangs of unrequited love or the frustration of the disintegration of the bridge of meaning.I am happy for you my friend.

[Wildfleour]

This kind of love is what everyone hopes to experience in a lifetime, but so many do not. I'm glad you have found this with your love..........