My Soulmate

A love poem for my lady ....

 

So where do I begin….???

With your radiant smile that lights my heart….

Or the softness of your kisses as like rose petals they shower me with love

Maybe your gentle fingers and the magical way they rouse the passion in me..

Your voice .. as it plays a symphony on my ears …music that ignites my love..

Or the silkiness of your skin as my fingers play a melody of love upon you …

The way you look asleep … contentment written in a glorious sweetness..

As your eyelids flutter softly as my sweet butterfly should …

Or the raging torrent of passion that we create ….

Like the Ride of the Valkyries as its reaches a crescendo …

Followed by the sweet calm of love as we lie together in each others arms…

Walking with my arm around you … such pride I feel at the beauty there beside me..

Or the deep, deep love I feel when I kneel before you and you hold me close to you

A forever love that transcends time and space and is us and us alone ..

In our cocoon of pleasure and desire ….

I want to sing on mountains and shout your name out loud …

Hearing it echo through the years …

For we are an unfinished symphony .. each day writing another passage..

More beautiful notes floating into our memories …

For us alone to feel the depth and feeling of …

You are my life… my forever darling …

My lover .. my soulmate .. my friend …..

Come fill the score with moments of pure joy …

And live the life we both have always dreamed …

 

 

Phil Sanders

7/5/08

Reviews

[Astrid Hamilton]

So where do I begin...???


The beginning line immediately embarks what is a passionate love letter;
so much to be whispered (in her ear),
and so to begin a BEAUTIFUL poem that way will then automatically have the curiousity of the reader,
and then with every word thereafter, so carefully chosen,
and which words have made me become teary-eyed; it is no lie;
for it is perfect and there is nothing that can be taken away from your true feelings,
a reader can only be grateful of being here to hear,
"so where do I begin ...???"

I love this line:

A forever love that transcends time and spaceand is us and us alone

It especially stands out in my recollection of this poem,
which I would love to see you handwrite for her,
as it would be the greatest gift you could ever bestow, besides your already given love; heart.

I like the way you use adjectives to describe your love; and the adverbs, the music, all the things that music does and can and will do; what kind of kisses? Soft, she is your butterfly;
what kind of smile, radiant, like the poem itself;
what kind of torrent of passion do they share? -Raging- their love is a fire that burns, a light that never goes out:

For we are an unfinished symphony

to be led to those same mountains,

I want to sing on mountains and shout your name outloud ...
Hearing it echo through the years ...


wow!

You have painted such a pretty image, of such a prettyheart man being so kind, so tender, so gentle,
showing her his deep, deep love,
and that song reverberates and rings through listening ears,
to the heartbeat first, then eyes, then words, and tears,
joyous,
overflowing,
bringing the present to the future,
making memories that will last and be cocooned in their love.

What a beautiful love letter.
You should be proud of the writer you are.

I am.
Of you.

[Brenda Sue]

Wow the passion and love of this piece comes out sweetly and endearing. A wonderful and beautifully penned love poem for your lady. You have out done yourself my friend. This one is going into my favorites.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Beautiful. Almost like a loveletter to someone very special. Excellent write.

[OceanTropic]

Wow, you are SUCH a romantic. This was SO romantic (which i'm guessing was the point). It was so lovely :)

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a captivating, beautiful love poem

[vanishing]

True romance my friend
you capture the heart and soul
in the intention-passionate
misted expression-ethearally
envisioned and beautiful..
Masterfully crafted.. Nice.

[Catrinka]

ah, love, what it inspires in us! Another loving tribute to your sweetheart, and beautifully done! Personally, my favorite line: For we are an unfinished symphony .. each day writing another passage..

Love the idea that the song plays on and on...

Kudos again my friend!

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This was pure delight to read. A joy.

[R J Askew]

I dunno how you do it!

[Angel's Lady]

You deeply passionate rascal you! Who could resist such a loverman as you?
Great job! *fanning myself here!*

[Gary H]

Such a wonderful loving write Phill. I often sit to write something similar but my words never come out as yours do. I get the impression that you write in a perfect flow until that particular episode of love has passed and another then takes it's place for another poem. I'm sure your hearts desire appreciates this and many others on WC will also.