Morning Tenderness

A love poem ...

I awake from slumbers deep ….my eyes still full of sleep

But the morning sun refreshes me .. welcoming me to the day

I feel your softness next to me .. and I smile…

A tenderness washes over me as I gently stroke your back and you stir …

Such love is pounding in my heart .. a drumbeat of togetherness

Your passion from the night is still upon me …

A fervent desire still throbs in my soul .. burned into my memory..

Another beautiful moment to cherish and adore …

I see the brightness of our love .. like a beacon rising over the hills..

Guiding us ever onwards to more happiness and joy …

I kiss your sweet and tender lips as your eyelids flutter ..

And I feel your heartbeat next to mine .. a rhythm of pure love…

Your smile as you sense the first moments of the day …and feel my hand upon you ..

A gentleness washes over us .. as the sea caresses the shore …

I whisper I LOVE YOU .. and your eyes reply so beautifully …

I know the raging torrent of passion in that moment …

As your love reflects in my eyes and we hold each other close…

Our nakedness a testament to our being .. our life as one …

The silence resounds gently in our souls..

No words necessary .. just the feather light touch of our lips and our fingers meeting ..

Love conquers all .. and shows us our destiny..

For our future is as one together …. always there for the other..

Always sensing and feeling the others’ needs …

A depth of understanding that is unique between two lovers..

Only they can understand … only they can know…

And as you snuggle into my arms and we melt into one …

I kiss you softly and thank my lucky stars for the day that I met you …..

My life is now complete ………….

 

Phil Sanders

24/4/08

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

And as you snuggle into my arms and we melt into one "
phil, this poem is absolute passion, and sentimental love held for the treasure close to your heart,
its blissfully conveyed with a sense of peaceful surrendering of two souls becoming one in a raptured
moment of happiness and knowing the future is bright, as seen through the eyes of love, the design,
straight sentence flow kept the charm and thought punctuated for with specific effect, beautiful
effort scribed with ease, one can feel the sensuous environment come to life in your words.

[Ice QueenJen]

I can say nothing more than what has already been said. But I will say this was lovely, like all of your poetry is!!!

[James Takeo Panton]

Ah, this is passionate and embraces such a great moment....it is so well-written and romantic and heartwarming....I really enjoyed this piece you wrote, and thank you for sharing such an intimate moment with us...

[Angelic Darkness]

Beautiful poem of a love between kindred spirits. I will however say
that I feel that the word love was overly used, but other than that,
good work. AD

[Angel's Lady]

A very passionate and sensually written moment of a morning shared...I love this, Phil, and I'm putting it in my favorites! I have already shared it with someone I love...

[Helena]

Absolutely stunning poetry Phil. I loved the sweet passion flowing so beautifully throughtout, the loving sentiments and your last line summed up the whole feel of the poem for me. I felt complete satisfaction reading this lovely piece. Well done indeed!

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OMG, i am melting with every word, this so beautifuly and passionate - the flow is like a soft melody that washes over my spirit releases my soul to search for my one and only love.

[None]

You show the fruits of love so tenderly and beautifully here in your poem here. You bare your soul and show what love can do to two. A gorgeous poem!

[Catrinka]

Simply fabulous Phil, but from you I expect nothing less! Tender, romantic, such a great tribute to your love. That's right, thank your lucky stars! KUDOS!!! another one for that lover's collection...

[Valentine]

Boy oh boy Phil,,she must really be something for you to be this stirred up about her..Tell her she is the lucky one as relationships like yours come about once in a lifetime if people are lucky..beautiful write..God bless you both..Valentine

[Wildfleour]

YAY for you!!!!!!!!! :)