Reflective Thoughts

Letting my mind wander ...

Reflections on the water .. reflections of my life..

The stillness of the day is deafening as the river sits patiently in the sunlight..

My mind feels the gentle silence and the reflective beauty …

Awash with loving thoughts of you.. and I smile …

Contemplating the loveliness that you bring to me ….

I feel your tenderness surround me ..

The sweetness of your lips on mine .. a passionate fire inside …

Raging in my soul as your sensuality burns deeply into me …

My new life feeling the birth of the spring’s renewal…

Contentment washing over me as the mist of love descends …

To lighten my thoughts and deepen my desires….

The lapping of the water .. soft and gentle like your touch …

But with a hidden sparkle that promises so much …..

I need to taste your love and let it drip all over me like a juicy peach …

Its nectar sweet and sticky on my lips .. its delicious flavour like your passion …

A day to experience the vibrancy of life .. and the subtlety of your being..

A time to appreciate your beauty and your love ……

 

Phil Sanders

15/04/08

Reviews

[Michael X]

phil, very expressively sensuous and romantically enhanced to full effect, the entire heated
vision is highly detailed, and reflects the essence of yearning in the throes of desiring one
who holds the heart captivated, the imagery pulls with a force of its own, captures the reader
in the midst of the moment held captive by pondering thoughts, as penned through the soul,
the passionate design is artistically crafted, smooth, and highly imaginative, dreamers dream.

[Ice QueenJen]

This stirs me up, yet a very romantic writing.

Makes me want to sit down and work on my latest story too.

I am glad that I finally sat down to read it too.
Letting my mind wander..........

[Brenda Sue]

Once again Phil, you have done an excellent job expressing love and romance to it's fullest. Beautifully penned. I love it.

[Brianna Brie]

Succulent...as juicy as they come...your poetry is edible to the soul. Lovely.

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful poem Phil, so tender,loving and full of desire, wonderful romantic and descriptive, sighhhhh. lovely work as always.

[Gary H]

There's some nice floating images in this. For me I thought that you overused the word 'love' in this. Must admit I have not noticed this before in your work which always is able to expresses that same type of feeling. Also I did think that you were going to move back to the thoughts of the water at the end as this would have rounded the poem off rather nicely, even if the first sentence was used again.

I hope you view my comments as constructive as overall I did enjoy reading this.

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wow, this is so beautiful

[None]

I really enjoyed your reflections on special times and thoughts. It's a true gift to have your beautiful words to keep you company until you are together. Very romantic!

[Catrinka]

Another great write for that book of yours, Phil. You may not know that when water is present in a Tarot card, it represents emotion and passion, so this piece was especially symbolic to me. As I read this, I saw the river you describe - beautiful, powerful, yet content. Kudos!

[Valentine]

Another wonderful tribute to your sweetheart..You are going to make a lot of people not lucky enough to have a new start in a relationship like yours envious..God bless..Valentine

[Raven Pegasus]

I can actually picture the scenery around as I read this. The romance of this is beautiful, and wonderful. I agree with others, there is a lot of visuality to this that draws us in.

Thank you for this...I totally enjoyed reading this!!!

Karol Lynn