The Sunlight of Freedom

Release from the shackles of the past ...

At last the sunlight of freedom beckons ....

An opening in the dark days of despair ....the future awaits ...

Your wings .. so long dusty and asleep .. are now awoken by the winds of change..

As they blow through your soul ...

The birds sing more brightly .. and the sky is bluer .. as the oceans roar thunders in your head...

You feel lightheaded and alive .. you can hear your heartbeat..

As it pounds the drum of delight in your footsteps ...

You can walk whichever road you choose ... the path of freedom is yours to take...

You are released froms the bonds of other's needs... yours are set free..

Your mind flows like a raging torrent of happiness and contentment

The light is shining brightly now ... leading you onwards ..

You take flight into your own life ..

Sail the winds ... fly the breeze ... laugh your tears of joy .....

I shall be proud to fly with you when and where you desire ......

You are ... yourself ............. and my heart beats with yours forever ....

 

Phil Sanders

7/4/08

 

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful poem, such gorgeous imagery, I can feel the sense of freedom and love, so wonderfully romantic, I especially love the lines
Your wings .. so long dusty and asleep .. are now awoken by the winds of change..As they blow through your soul

sighhhh, I'm dreaming about it and I have to say the photo is stunning, I feel inspiration gnawing at me LOL.
Lovely write Mr romance :)

[Valentine]

Phillip...if she doesn't cry over this one..she is missing out on just how much you care about her..Lucky girl..Nice and deeply romantic piece..God bless..Valentine

[Brenda Sue]

Such beautiful imagery. Beautifully penned. I love it.

[Amor-de-angel]

I maybe interpreted it differently..but I saw it as a journey into another realm....after death...
random but that's my take...every poem is different to different people i think
Loved it Phil....thanks

[Robert Wilson]

Wow, this is beautiful. I interpret it as being free from prison after a lengthy incarceration, but I guess it could also be about getting out of a dominative relationship. Wonder write, I love it!

[None]

If you love someone let them go...
Your poem has a way of understanding love that is not common.
To let someone go freely and be comfortable with it and no sadness? That is a true gift.....
"Your wings .. so long dusty and asleep .. are now awoken by the winds of change..As they blow through your soul ..."
Your poem ignites such glorious feelings, a special love story exists underneath your words.
A stellar ending here is written by your graceful hand....
"Sail the winds ... fly the breeze ... laugh your tears of joy .....I shall be proud to
fly with you when and where you desire ......You are ... yourself .............
and my heart beats with yours forever "
....What wonderful words of love and freedom, a very deep love.