I Am Content

Gentle morning joy ...

What is the sun that’s shining in my heart?

Its my love for you ….

I waken to the singing birds and feel the freshness of the day

And your smile kisses my soul …

A touch of softness and pure joy …

I leave my eyes closed and let your beauty seep into my mind..

I am ….. content ….

 

I wait for the moment that we meet …

My heart pounds with anticipation .. my lips dry …

And then the glory that is a wind of passion and desire blows though me …

Then you appear … and my breath stops for a moment as you take it away ..

I reach out and the love that we share flows between us …

And the first kiss of the day takes me soaring above the clouds …

I am….. content …..

 

Your voice fills me with delight..

As your words flow over me like a crystal clear mountain stream..

Refreshing … renewing ..exciting … interesting ..

Providing nourishment to my soul…

A river of enjoyment as you share your life with me…

Pouring your thoughts over me like a warm summer shower..

I am ….content….

 

The day stretches ahead with promises of love and laughter..

Sharing each other .. our desires .. our needs .. our happiness

A myriad of emotions .. filling us with such beauty…

Your loveliness like a silken fog surrounding me..

As I drift through the pleasure that is you …

Content … in seventh heaven with my lover.. my soulmate and my friend…

I am… in love with you ……….

 

Phil Sanders

5/4/08

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I am just about to go to bed. And while your words are not directed at me personally, they are like a soothing cup of cocoa. The line that catches my eye is 'As I drift through the pleasure that is you'. Normally drift is not good in our go getting world and implies a sense of diretionless, but it also suggests a state of easy with things and is arguably a desireable way to be, the opposite of tense and thrusting. I also like the idea of a person being a pleasure as opposed to a pleasure that is bought and carried from a shop or a brochure. Your lines bear your hallmark optimism and just feel 'right'. And so to bed...content.

[jen -- JG]

It is easy to see that your love touches all your senses here and finds love, passion and contentment in each one.

Again, a sensual, sweetly loving poem.

Well done

Jen

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Your writings are always so beautifully written, you're gonna have to start writing bad writes I'm running out of good things to say about your work, Phil.

=)
Great Write
Rayne

[Brenda Sue]

As always, brilliant. Very well written, I love it. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Valentine]

Phil..I hope she apprediates the way you are so freely able to express your feelings to her in words..Just remember she needs to hear aloud all of these same words spoken from your heart..Nice write..I am glad she made it safely home..God bless...Valentine

[Catrinka]

Your words are lovely and romantic as usual, and does evoke a feeling of peace and contentment! Kudos Phil, another great write! Kudos!

[Amor-de-angel]

This makes me feel so calm.

Your loveliness like a silken fog surrounding me..
As I drift through the pleasure that is you �

lovely words Phil...

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful and romantic, such wonderful words of love, the romance king in full flow, gorgeous imagery and tenderness. Lovely write it made my heart beat just a little faster and I almost forgot to breathe ....... you have me sighing wistfully again LOL

Good form, even if there are some long lines, it still fits well.

Good use of words and rhythm, it all jives well.

Good read