My Mind Feels You Close

A love poem ... I know .. unusual for me ... smiling ...

The day meanders further … wind and rain mixed with the sun of a smile

Time drips slowly from the clock of thought ..

Taking me to other worlds and places that I desire..

You slip into my mind and set my pulse racing …..

My heart pounds faster as your eyes seep into mine …

Holding me close and showing me your love …

Passion awakes and the furnace burns brighter … my soul beams

Your beauty .. like a summer’s day .. washes over me

And the tears of distance run down my cheeks …

You are flying back to me .. on the wings of love …

Bringing my life with you .. to make me whole again ..

Your lips press softly against mine .. like an angel’s kiss

Tender and inviting … teasing me from afar .. offering desire..

A gentle summer breeze brushes my fingers as I feel your softness close by ..

Your silky skin .. smooth against my cheek … and full of need …

A furnace of emotion courses my veins .. as I feel you beside me now …

Our love flowing like lava from Etna’s depths..

Ready to overcome us with wanton craving…

And everlasting love ….

Fly to me my beautiful butterfly ..

Rest your soft gossamer wings on my body ….
And flutter your eyelids in my mind ….

Awakening the love of centuries .. and the tenderness of your soul

 

Phil Sanders

27/3/08

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I really like this line: 'Time drips slowly from the clock of thought' It turns me on. I was happy with the poem when I read that line. In fact that line was in my head to the end and I went back to it to have another look. I had more of an emotional reaction to the river/river poem I read before this one, but the second line of this one appeals to the mind.

[Tania Leigh]

Very passionate and tender, Phil. I think somewhere your muse is smiling after having read this.
A wonderful poem!

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful as always Phil, such loving and tender words, very nicely done, you romance king LOL, I really love the line

Time drips slowly from the clock of thought ..

gorgeous words. sighhhhh

[Nicholas Hallows]

Another beautiful piece.
The first two lines are definitely my favourite
'The day meanders further � wind and rain mixed with the sun of a smile
Time drips slowly from the clock of thought ..'
Great stuff!
NH

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

you must have someone very special in you life to create such beautiful love poetry. Beautifully penned, Phil.

Great Write.
Rayne