My Mind Feels You Close

A love poem ... I know .. unusual for me ... smiling ...

The day meanders further … wind and rain mixed with the sun of a smile

Time drips slowly from the clock of thought ..

Taking me to other worlds and places that I desire..

You slip into my mind and set my pulse racing …..

My heart pounds faster as your eyes seep into mine …

Holding me close and showing me your love …

Passion awakes and the furnace burns brighter … my soul beams

Your beauty .. like a summer’s day .. washes over me

And the tears of distance run down my cheeks …

You are flying back to me .. on the wings of love …

Bringing my life with you .. to make me whole again ..

Your lips press softly against mine .. like an angel’s kiss

Tender and inviting … teasing me from afar .. offering desire..

A gentle summer breeze brushes my fingers as I feel your softness close by ..

Your silky skin .. smooth against my cheek … and full of need …

A furnace of emotion courses my veins .. as I feel you beside me now …

Our love flowing like lava from Etna’s depths..

Ready to overcome us with wanton craving…

And everlasting love ….

Fly to me my beautiful butterfly ..

Rest your soft gossamer wings on my body ….
And flutter your eyelids in my mind ….

Awakening the love of centuries .. and the tenderness of your soul

 

Phil Sanders

27/3/08

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I really like this line: 'Time drips slowly from the clock of thought' It turns me on. I was happy with the poem when I read that line. In fact that line was in my head to the end and I went back to it to have another look. I had more of an emotional reaction to the river/river poem I read before this one, but the second line of this one appeals to the mind.

[Sr.phil]

great, just great..
Sr.Phil

[Enigma]

Romantic indeed.Great Job!!Romance is practicall filled in every single word here.I enjoyed it!!

[Gary H]

Yet again you have a richness of thought with such wonderful images of beauty and passion within your words. The way you tenderly caress the poem from start to finish makes this a joy to behold.

[Valentine]

Wonderful write..so full of a deep love and devotion for your soulmate..Fly back to you..I hope the plane from New Zealand arrived and you let her read this..A very nice tribute of love for your lady...God Bless...Valentine

[None]

Your poem etches so much beauty and elegance out for the reader. Your whole poem is so endearing. I especially love this part...
"Our love flowing like lava from Etna's depths..Ready to overcome us with wanton craving�And everlasting love �.Fly to me my beautiful butterfly ..Rest your soft gossamer wings on my body �.
And flutter your eyelids in my mind �.Awakening the love of centuries .. and the tenderness "
Wow, I am in awe of your lovely words! Pure beauty!

[Catrinka]

Another beautiful write for that book of yours Phil...beautiful imagery, a wonderful expression of feeling. And you are the master of exquisite last lines in a poem - you close this perfectly with "Awakening the love of centuries .. and the tenderness of your soul". VERY NICELY DONE!!!

[Fran Marie]

Blissfully Romantic in beautiful poetic verse~very nice indeed!~Fran Marie

[Brenda Sue]

Awesome, very romantic and passionate. But I can't pick a favorite line cause I love them all. Beautifully penned. Excellent job.

[An Ordinary Woman]

So very lucky you are to have these feelings of which you so elegantly write. :+)


The poem is quite stunning, as she must be. I'm thrilled for you both dearest friend.