My Mind Feels You Close

My Mind Feels You Close

A Poem by Phil Sanders
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A love poem ... I know .. unusual for me ... smiling ...

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The day meanders further … wind and rain mixed with the sun of a smile

Time drips slowly from the clock of thought ..
Taking me to other worlds and places that I desire..
You slip into my mind and set my pulse racing …..
My heart pounds faster as your eyes seep into mine …
Holding me close and showing me your love …
Passion awakes and the furnace burns brighter … my soul beams
Your beauty .. like a summer’s day .. washes over me
And the tears of distance run down my cheeks …
You are flying back to me .. on the wings of love …
Bringing my life with you .. to make me whole again ..
Your lips press softly against mine .. like an angel’s kiss
Tender and inviting … teasing me from afar .. offering desire..
A gentle summer breeze brushes my fingers as I feel your softness close by ..
Your silky skin .. smooth against my cheek … and full of need …
A furnace of emotion courses my veins .. as I feel you beside me now …
Our love flowing like lava from Etna’s depths..
Ready to overcome us with wanton craving…
And everlasting love ….
Fly to me my beautiful butterfly ..
Rest your soft gossamer wings on my body ….
And flutter your eyelids in my mind ….
Awakening the love of centuries .. and the tenderness of your soul
 
Phil Sanders
27/3/08

© 2008 Phil Sanders


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I really like this line: 'Time drips slowly from the clock of thought' It turns me on. I was happy with the poem when I read that line. In fact that line was in my head to the end and I went back to it to have another look. I had more of an emotional reaction to the river/river poem I read before this one, but the second line of this one appeals to the mind.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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great, just great..
Sr.Phil

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Romantic indeed.Great Job!!Romance is practicall filled in every single word here.I enjoyed it!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yet again you have a richness of thought with such wonderful images of beauty and passion within your words. The way you tenderly caress the poem from start to finish makes this a joy to behold.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful write..so full of a deep love and devotion for your soulmate..Fly back to you..I hope the plane from New Zealand arrived and you let her read this..A very nice tribute of love for your lady...God Bless...Valentine

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem etches so much beauty and elegance out for the reader. Your whole poem is so endearing. I especially love this part...
"Our love flowing like lava from Etna's depths..Ready to overcome us with wanton craving�And everlasting love �.Fly to me my beautiful butterfly ..Rest your soft gossamer wings on my body �.
And flutter your eyelids in my mind �.Awakening the love of centuries .. and the tenderness "
Wow, I am in awe of your lovely words! Pure beauty!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Another beautiful write for that book of yours Phil...beautiful imagery, a wonderful expression of feeling. And you are the master of exquisite last lines in a poem - you close this perfectly with "Awakening the love of centuries .. and the tenderness of your soul". VERY NICELY DONE!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like this line: 'Time drips slowly from the clock of thought' It turns me on. I was happy with the poem when I read that line. In fact that line was in my head to the end and I went back to it to have another look. I had more of an emotional reaction to the river/river poem I read before this one, but the second line of this one appeals to the mind.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Blissfully Romantic in beautiful poetic verse~very nice indeed!~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome, very romantic and passionate. But I can't pick a favorite line cause I love them all. Beautifully penned. Excellent job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

So very lucky you are to have these feelings of which you so elegantly write. :+)


The poem is quite stunning, as she must be. I'm thrilled for you both dearest friend.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Phil Sanders
Phil Sanders

Rochester, Kent, United Kingdom



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I am a part time photographer and poet when I am not earning my normal crust. I live in Kent in the UK in a little village called Upnor which is right on the River Medway. I love photographing sunris.. more..

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