Intimate Thoughts

A gentle love poem ...

Sitting here quietly as the rain gently falls

A day full of clouds and showery squalls

But my heart full of sunlight and beauteous thoughts

As I now know the way that my life runs its course

Your loveliness fills all my soul and my heart

A cup that’s so full it overflowed from the start

I see all the love that is lit in your eyes

And still that thought sparks so much joy and surprise

For you are so special … a dream that’s come true

I’ll always be saying how much I love you

I still taste your kisses although we’re apart

Your softness is with me so deep in my heart

My life is fulfilled with your beauty and charms

I wait here until you return to my arms

I love you my darling more than you’ll ever know

A lifetime of passion for you here I’ll show

When once more together as one we will be

With love and deep feelings so intimately

 

Phil Sanders

16/3/08

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Well, another fine write here! Except with this one, I noticed something different for you...almost every line of this love poem is a love poem in and of itself. I don't see this a whole lot but there are a few of my favorite writers here in The Cafe who achieve this from time to time and I see now you must have been hanging with them....cuz, this one has those qualities also! Love it!

[R J Askew]

A lovely write, I am humbled by the sincerity and positve feelings of love and happiness you can call up. There is a purity of feeling here which, for someone who whom thinking gets the better of feelings is an eye opener.

[Jofer Serapio]

Sigh... I needed that. Thank you very much for sharing. I remembered my special someone and this work just brought out the emotions and the words I wanted to share with her. So I called her. It went well. Thank you Phil. Another splendid work of art.

[Ani Ashford]

A heartful poem. You are so dancing on air. Lovely piece for your lady.

[Nicholas Hallows]

Another beautiful poem. NH

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful Phil, so tenderly written, such poignant words full of love, you always make me shed salty tears as they always get me, I'm so hopelessly romantic :)

[Brenda Sue]

A very gentle love poem and so beautiful. You have done an excellent job my friend. Wonderfully penned.

[Babbette Francis]

Wow, I wish I could write like that!!!! This was stunning!!!
I think I love her too!!! lol.

[Catrinka]

This IS a gentle love poem - so sweetly done! I especially like the contrast between the weather and what is in your heart. And the pic is fabulous! Where was it taken?