Intimate Thoughts

A gentle love poem ...

Sitting here quietly as the rain gently falls

A day full of clouds and showery squalls

But my heart full of sunlight and beauteous thoughts

As I now know the way that my life runs its course

Your loveliness fills all my soul and my heart

A cup that’s so full it overflowed from the start

I see all the love that is lit in your eyes

And still that thought sparks so much joy and surprise

For you are so special … a dream that’s come true

I’ll always be saying how much I love you

I still taste your kisses although we’re apart

Your softness is with me so deep in my heart

My life is fulfilled with your beauty and charms

I wait here until you return to my arms

I love you my darling more than you’ll ever know

A lifetime of passion for you here I’ll show

When once more together as one we will be

With love and deep feelings so intimately

 

Phil Sanders

16/3/08

Reviews

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Well, another fine write here! Except with this one, I noticed something different for you...almost every line of this love poem is a love poem in and of itself. I don't see this a whole lot but there are a few of my favorite writers here in The Cafe who achieve this from time to time and I see now you must have been hanging with them....cuz, this one has those qualities also! Love it!

[jen -- JG]

Each line of this poem is an outpouring of deep love and gentle passion.
A sweet gentle love song meant for the special lady in your life and it shows.

Well done

cheers

jen

[Carl]

Good morning this a nice poem. It shows to me that the love you have for this lady is very deep. The lines are well presented and thought out. A good write some times the best poems have the fewest lines. A very well put together peice.

[Brianna Brie]

Your expression of love is so tender. It is a privilege to read your intimate thoughts.

[Just Manoosh]

Such a tender love poem sweetie, when I came to the end I actually sighed. Beautiful. Mx

[Gary H]

Quite brilliant the way you pull the reader into sharing your feelings of love and tenderness. This is very well done.

[Rain]

This seems to be a long distance love, the hardest kind on the spirit. The distance increases the emotions. It must be difficult. Rain..

[Fran Marie]

A very soft and tender write so beaitifully penned my friend~Fran

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

a lovely sweet tender piece. you write so beautifully. beautifully penned.


Great Write

[None]

Very soothing and tender! The love pours out into beautiful words. A gorgeous poem.