Enduring Love

My love continues to inspire ....

The morning dawns around me

Spilling light into my mind

As the birds sing with such eloquence

And loveliness I find

A new day dawns without you

The clouds of sorrow weep

But I know that I will love you more

Before I go to sleep

I have a world of happiness

That only we do know

And come the Spring’s magnificence

More joy we both shall sow

As I am yours my darling

For now and evermore

And softly I will wait

To see that open door

When you return with pleasure

And such kisses so divine

We’ll laugh and hug and love and cry

Until the end of time

Creating more sweet memories

Enjoying who we are

No matter where we do it

Either here or off afar

For as eternal soulmates

Our love will never die

But always be within us

And in the sea and sky

Sailing over oceans

Flying with the storm

A love that will endure

Until we are reborn

 

Phil Sanders

9/3/08

 

Reviews

[Just Manoosh]

The thought that love transcends time baffles me, I so want to belief it but a certain amount of difficulty over the last few years has made me more reserved, weirdly the reservation is only for my own heart and not for others .... others I want to love with no boundaries. This piece is beautifully said and expertly penned, love is touching souls, a gorgeous piece. Mx

[Tyler Bates]

Honestly this is probably the best written and most emotionally sound poem I have read in a long time. Can't wait to read more from you.

[jen -- JG]

This is a beautiful poem Phil, and one that would make a fantastic insert in a special "I Love You type card for your lady love.

Sweet, sentimental and loving this is a pleasure to read,

Well done Phil

jen

[SweetPeachesAlways]

As I am yours my darling
For now and evermore
And softly I will wait
To see that open door

You ol' mushbucket you! Gimme a hug, you big lug...OH! get your hand off my a*s!

Nicely written, friend, nicely written!

[V. K. Harris]

Excellent, a perfect and loving write. Well done.

[Brianna Brie]

And such kisses so divine
We'll laugh and hug and love and cry
Until the end of time
Creating more sweet memories
Enjoying who we are
No matter where we do it
Either here or off afar
For as eternal soulmates
Our love will never die

Touching, sweet write and one to treasure. The first to go into my library since the wipe out.

[PoemRodent]

Very deep and well penned. Your imagery is on top and a nice flow is a given. Great write!!!!

Dostani

[Fantasyfairy]

This was a beautiful poem. Love and elegance are in this. It flows well, and your use of words means the rhyming has been done very well. XX

[Babbette Francis]

I swear, while reading this I thought I was going through this extremely emotional shift in life that causes one to cry at the drop of a hat but I see I'm the only one- so I guess I'm normal- well maybe not normal, lol- but at least I know after reading some of the reviews below why I was so touched by your words. STUNNING, Phil.... STUNNING!!!!

[Ani Ashford]

So beautiful...... Thank you.