I Am Fulfilled

My joy, pleasure and love exploding inside me ....

The wind tears at my face as I run through the storm

My mind whirling with passion, joy and desire….

A moment’s beautiful madness as the rain soaks me

Making me laugh out loud….

My laughter disappears on the wind …

Into the unknown distance ….to be picked up by the leaves..

As they scatter under the storm’s wrath…

But nothing can stop the joy in my heart ….

I am fulfilled .. after all of these years…

 

A soulmate has entered my being and delivered me from eternal despair…

Lighting my heart and my mind with her love and desire..

Her tenderness and her beauty ….

Each time my lips touch hers .. the lightning flashes in my soul…

Leaving me in pure ecstasy … awaiting the next electric touch..

We run naked through our lives …pleasure oozing from our pores

A joy and passion that cannot be dimmed but will always shine brightly in the sky

I feel her presence whether she is lying next to me.. or across the ocean…

It stills my beating heart and fills it with contentment …

What joys and pleasures there are to come …

Each moment with her a new lifetime ….

I am fulfilled ………forever

 

Phil Sanders

8/3/08

 

Reviews

[Tania Leigh]

Somebody's in love :-)

Wonderful poem, Phil.....I am a big fan of combining the elements of weather and emotions, so this one spoke to me. I like that you used the wind and rain....the essence of the storm itself....to be co-conspirators with your happiness to elude the wrath of the storm --- very clever.

"The wind tears at my face as I run through the storm
My mind whirling with passion, joy and desire�.
A moment's beautiful madness as the rain soaks me
Making me laugh out load�.
My laughter disappears on the wind �
Into the unknown distance �.to be picked up by the leaves..
As they scatter under the storm's wrath�
But nothing can stop the joy in my heart �."

Beautiful write!

[Lady Of Darkness]

Beautiful write here phil
You can sense the love in this piece.
well done

[jen -- JG]

How wonderful the glow of love and fulfilment is and how it shines through our writing.
A clever use of the raging weather mixed with the raging passion plus the line breaks show passion and lighning strikes and the way the poem slides gently down into a slower pace indicates the ebb and flow of passion into contentment, and fullilment forever.

Well Done.
jen

[Sr.phil]

Love, I think so...

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Spectacular, Philip! Simply, quite simply, wonderful....

[Vatsayayana]

Howl! I say, HOWL!
This is a scream it off the rooftops.
Dance naked in the rain, wrapping your arms around yourself, for fear you'll explode into a billion pieces and float away! Such excitement. Such passion. Such love. Such laughter.
This is Light. This is pure liquid Light that warms me to my toes and delights me forever more in the hereafter.

[Enigma]

Like...WOW!!!
Well penned, oh yeah!Just that the word 'load' in the fourth line, is it 'loud' mispelled??
Otherwise, the poem's romantic, full of beautiful images (atleat in my mind) and awesome....

[Carl]

God - whats happening to you lol You are speaking like you are about 16. running home from school. can't sleep at night, Can't eat. waiting by the phone. waiting for the postaman to deliver hoping you get a letter. You got it bad phil... And its brilliant... It's a real pleasure to read work from a guy whose not afraid to bare his heart and soul through waht he writes. Phil's in love and he doesn't care who knows. shout it from the rooftops mate. i really hope it works out for you
Every good wish

[Gary H]

Another poem of pure love and beauty. The combination between the nature and the person comes across in this. As we are all part of the world of existence I think this idea works well showing how the elements can be used in poetic love and, of course, to be fulfilled.
Great work.

[Brianna Brie]

Alright, Phil, you have my attention. You restore my faith in love and romance. It is a pleasure to see it through your eyes. Beautiful!

[Jofer Serapio]

I lvoe the imagery! Dedicated to your lady friend, I assume? XD

Weather has always been associated with women in terms of casually changing itself or with men in terms of being too stubborn to change. Contradictions are wonderful tools in making a wonderful poem. I was especially enthralled by the way you expressed your thoughts. Very well written. Thanks you for sharing!