With Your Winged Chariot

With Your Winged Chariot

A Poem by Phil Sanders
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Another transatlantic collaboration with the very talented Brenda Sue

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I have been haunted every minute that you've been away,
And time has no meaning till our glorious reunion day.
Our love sweetly echoes the distance to the stars,
Around the sun and moon, then straight to Mars.
The sky is so full of twinkling lights
My loneliness without you a piteous sight
I feel such desolation as I look in the sky
Without you beside me I feel that I will die
Under a crescent moon, so fair and fragile,
Apart from you, everyday is a new struggle.
My soul was lost in time from loving you,
Crossing the distance you came to my rescue.
So with your winged chariot, chase across the sky
Fill my heart with joy as you descend from up on high
Make my love explode with a million kisses sweet
And blow my mind forever as you sweep me off my feet
So as I stand here watching with the stars so bright above
I offer you the world with a galaxy of love

Phil Sanders and Brenda Sue
 

© 2008 Phil Sanders


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I have to agree this is a wonderful collaberation. A wonderful and vivid write!


Posted 16 Years Ago


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The picture is perfect. I love it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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So beautiful...such a passionate tribute to love. Ahh...breathe in, breathe out, ahhhh.
Heys, guys, great collaboration! I honestly could not tell where one of you ended and the other began! Terrific blending of styles!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

You did it again...Another stunning piece. You two will take some beating. I must get collaborating soon.
I love the last three lines...perfect


Posted 16 Years Ago


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Phil Sanders
Phil Sanders

Rochester, Kent, United Kingdom



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I am a part time photographer and poet when I am not earning my normal crust. I live in Kent in the UK in a little village called Upnor which is right on the River Medway. I love photographing sunris.. more..

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