With Your Winged Chariot

Another transatlantic collaboration with the very talented Brenda Sue

I have been haunted every minute that you've been away,
And time has no meaning till our glorious reunion day.
Our love sweetly echoes the distance to the stars,
Around the sun and moon, then straight to Mars.
The sky is so full of twinkling lights
My loneliness without you a piteous sight
I feel such desolation as I look in the sky
Without you beside me I feel that I will die
Under a crescent moon, so fair and fragile,
Apart from you, everyday is a new struggle.
My soul was lost in time from loving you,
Crossing the distance you came to my rescue.
So with your winged chariot, chase across the sky
Fill my heart with joy as you descend from up on high
Make my love explode with a million kisses sweet
And blow my mind forever as you sweep me off my feet
So as I stand here watching with the stars so bright above
I offer you the world with a galaxy of love

Phil Sanders and Brenda Sue
 

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I have to agree this is a wonderful collaberation. A wonderful and vivid write!

[Fran Marie]

A wonderfully written collab piece~great Job!!~Fran

[An Ordinary Woman]

What can I possibly say that hasn't already been said? This is fabulous on both parts, methinks your both brilliant!

[OceanTropic]

Very well written. It's so nice, especially when you bring two great writers together, the result is always just so wonderful!

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful collaboration, wonderful tender, passionate, heart aching words, you again reduced me to tears with such wonderful lines as

My soul was lost in time from loving you,
Crossing the distance you came to my rescue.

Great poem, you work well together

[None]

Sweet and heartfelt! A beauty-filled collaberation. Your galaxy is quite lovely to behold!

[Spoken]

awsome collab, you both work so well together. Love the word choices and imagery! Well written you two!

[Ani Ashford]

Beautiful, just beautiful. I am speechless. You two are quite a team! More, more.... I could do a painting of that poem. If you keep this up you will have to publish a book

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

You two work great together - it shows!


Great Write.

[Isaiah Jay]

very pretty. I love the picture of the car.