Montage of Freedom

Fly free amongst the clouds .....

The storm brews and the wind howls

Your face is battered by the rain

But it frees you from the shackles of the world

Clearing a path in your mind to nirvana

You smile as you fight the raging storm

Your being exudes joy at the tearing rain

Your inner peace rejoices

At the freedom nature brings

The trickling brook with cold clear water

The freshness of the mountain air

Fling open your mind to contentment

And the peace within your life

 

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

Beautifully written. I love the rain and how refreshing it makes one feel. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[Sally Edwards]

I like this one very much, I love it when there is a storm I love to stand in it and feel the rain lash my face and the wind take my hair in a race, LOL.... so this poem is wonderful I find everything so fresh afterwards being mind, body and soul which is what you seem to be saying too.

[Sr.phil]

one with nature, how purifying the feeling can be. Its raining here where i live and this piece just made the day from grey to great, thanks. Little different style from what i have in your poems, works well. they dont always have to rhyme to bring beauty to life, thumbs up! next?...phil

[Alexander W. Quinn]

A great piece, and I love the powerful relationship to nature. Even when you're getting soaking wet, there really is nothing quite like being in the rain. :)

[Lady Of Darkness]

I love the rain, its fun to dance in lol
I like the first 2 lines, i think they were the most powerful.
Nicely done.