Golden Glow

The sunlight shining through the wintry landscape

The golden glow effuses

Between the wintry trees

Enlightening the moment

A light for nature's breeze

Such incandescent glory

As the light delights the eye

And daylight rises beautifully

To cascade o'er the sky

So let the magic fill you

With wonder and sweet thoughts

As gently through the day

Your mind just takes its course

 

Phil Sanders

20/2/08

Reviews

[Valentine]

Phil..love the little bit of olde English in this ,,nice write,,God bless..Valentine

[Yemaya Theresa]

Reading it is like floating away on a cloud of words. Lovely

[jen -- JG]

Even the cold bleakness of winter dies under the spell of a beautidul sunrise. Tis enough to warm the cockles of me 'eart it is!

A sweet write Phil.
jen-JG

[ah]

your mind just takes its course like the suns journey across the sky

[An Ordinary Woman]

So let the magic fill you
With wonder and sweet thoughts
As gently through the day
Your mind just takes its course.... and I do. I love to see the sunlight dancing across the field, so beautiful!

[Amor-de-angel]

As always a good flow and so such an easy poem to drift away to

[Jofer Serapio]

Lovely work here, Phil. It's appeasing that you observed the sunrise as such. I don't get to do the same since I always wake up midday. XD

[R J Askew]

Again I am envious that you have time to notice and observe so well the sunrises. They are such a cheerful time and often very beautiful. And what could be more hopeful than the start of a new day...it's astonishing when you think about it yet most of us just groan come the moment.

[Fran Marie]

What a lovely soft flowing piece of writing~ a delight to read~Fran

[Sally Edwards]

This is lovely after reviewing your previous stormy poem which whipped up my imagination this one is beautifully light and airy and gently soothes me.............gorgeous image to go with a gorgeous poem too