A Visionary Dawning

Spring is on its way ...

The radiant incandescence

Of spring’s new birth and cheer

The warmth of bright new sunlight

As it starts to reappear

A bold reaffirmation

Of commitment in our Earth

A chance to feel again …

The wonder of our birth

As mist gives way to sunlight

As snow melts to new springs

The bird’s melodious laughter

Around our ears now sings

The feeling deep inside us

As we waken from the gloom

Despondency is lifted

It will be summer soon

And so … our spirits lifted

We approach the coming day

With a brighter … lighter vision

In each and every way

 

Phil Sanders

Reviews

[Kim Kruger]

Amen to that, Phil. Spring is a bit later arriving here...more snow in the forecast for Friday, but your words bring reassurance that the season soon will come.

[jen -- JG]

Uplifing and descriptive. There is something about the daffodil to brighten the hearts of all who see it.

No matter how dark the season - just the promise of spring brings a happy glow and a lighter heart

Thank you for this one Phil

jen-JG

[ah]

perfect descriptions great write thanks for asking me to read keep it up

[Steven Williams]

Another terrific write and I am a huge fan of spring (fall as well), but you have me looking forward to spring. Keep up the great work.

~Stephen

[Nicholas Hallows]

This is a great and uplifting poem. Very visionary... reminds me of Henry Vaughan. Nice. NH

[An Ordinary Woman]

Beautiful Phil, in both vision and words....

[The Ponderings of Bella]

I must say that whether it be the winter's long months or if it has to do with the fact that it is simply easier to write dark and sad poetry .... I was growing rather tired of it.... you obviously have the skills and abillities to lift the mood and write a beautiful and songlike poem of not only the changing of months but the renewal of hope in hearts and the promise of a better morrow .... well done! :)

[Floating on the feather..]

A very uplifting piece which is immensely positive.

It makes you feel as warm as the sun beams on your window sill after the chilly winters.

Lovely.

[Fran Marie]

As mist gives way to sunlight
As snow melts to new springs
The bird's melodious laughter
Around our ears now sings

Beautiful descriptives of springtime renewal and all its splendid glory
wonderfully written~Fran

[R J Askew]

The poem is just totally positive, very uplifting. We all get terrified by climate change but the daffodils do still pop up.