A Moment in Time

Life ...........

As the mind turns slowly through the passing day

Assimilating images of time

A breath of beauteous magic flashes by

And it stops and paints an image so sublime

The depth of mood created at that moment

The vision of a world so far apart

Is giving such ethereal emotion

And making all the senses glow and start

For each of us has feelings that are roused

By different apparitions of the mind

Which cause such deep and poignant intimations

As further in our psyche we unwind

 

Phil Sanders

21/3/07

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

another lovey poem that makes one wonder at the beauty around us and also makes us feel.

The memory of the words lasts much longer than the eyes take to read the poem.

jen

[ah]

this is a great a*s writing, thanx for asking me to read

[An Ordinary Woman]

For each of us has feelings that are roused
By different apparitions of the mind. Wow.

I see the reviews/remarks below mine and that nearly everyone commented on these lines. lol
They truly are mind blowing. They are powerful enough to create a poem all by themselves.

Wonderful writing!

[Yemaya Theresa]

"For each of us has feelings that are roused By different apparitions of the mind"

I Love this line. So immensly beautiful.

[Fran Marie]

A breath of beauteous magic flashes by
And it stops and paints an image so sublime
The depth of mood created at that moment

Beautiful poetic expression within this lovely poem~Quite lovely indeed!~Fran

[R J Askew]

Awe-some in the orginal meaning of the word. You being in awe at the power and beauty of nature all around us.

[Candle in the wind]

This poem reflects the myriad images reflected in the mind and crystalised in a moment.The apparitions of the mind come alive.

[Rain]

This poem create so many images..some I understood, and others I didn't, which doesn't matter. What matters to me, is does it create feeling, does it stay with you after you've read it. It had all those. Great write. Rain..