Thoughts

An affirmation of love ....

Shed your fears

Lose your tears

Smile at life

Banish strife

I am here

Always near

Opens arms

Want your charms

Gentle kiss

Subtle bliss

Morning love

Free above

Sensual touch

Love so much

Smile so bright

Sheer delight

Rumpled sheets

Love complete

Sandy shore

Ocean’s roar

Foggy night

Warm delights

Future moon

Together soon

Love you deep

As one we sleep

 

Phil Sanders

13/2/08

 

Reviews

[jen -- JG]

Another good write Phil. These fleeting thoughts of a lover are wonderful, each on its own is special - a subtle reminder during the day that the one you love is not by your side but these thoughts are reminding you.

From a beginning love, needing assurance, to the comeing together as one- this poem can be read from the male or female point of view, both offering love and strength to the other.

A romantic journey from the first tentaive togetherness, to sometimes parting and final loving as one unit - complete.

well done Phil

jen-JG

[An Ordinary Woman]

I enjoyed your writing in this structure... it works very well for this writing. It feels of love and reassurance, and love brand new and filled with hope and promise. Lovely Phil...

[Amy Carroll]

Nice poem... Interesting form. Thanks for the share.

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful poem, I love the words this was a charming and delightful read, I almost feel like an intruder and I'm reading someone's message of reassurance of love.

[Candle in the wind]

This affirmation is so reassuring.It soothes and comforts.