Sharing Love

A love poem ....

Sharing love is tenderness

As the hearts just open wide

Feeling such sweet softness

Standing side by side

Watching aspens sway
As winds around do blow

Holding hands in summer

As the sun now sets so low

Seeing all the creatures

Running round the world

Feeling light and giddy

Vortices that swirl

Loving thoughts are passing

Just between our eyes

Nothing is too much

Loving each surprise

Going off to sleep

Every night as one

Then to have the pleasure

To wake up with the sun

 

Phil Sanders

21/11/07

Reviews

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful tender words of love and being loved Phil, you are a master at expressing this I really like the words
Going off to sleep
Every night as one
Then to have the pleasure
To wake up with the sun

Sighhh, how devine to be able to do that, you are a lucky man Phil to have this love

[Brenda Sue]

Going off to sleep
Every night as one
Then to have the pleasure
To wake up with the sun

So very beautifully written and heart felt. I love this last verse. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[ah]

the ending of this writing is perfect, great write, thanks for asking me to read, keep writing

[jen -- JG]

What can I say about "Sharing Love" ? Well for a start it is romantic, it reads well, it makes the reader feel good, it is passionate in a non contfrontal way,it is filled with emotion and great imagery, it touches the very core of sharing love and embraces it.

What can I say Phil, expect another amazing poem --- you old romantic you. Well done! jen

[Fran Marie]

Blissfully romantic,endearing and beautifully penned~Fran Marie

[Michael X]

phil, this is skillfully romantic and classic, really creates a valentine
ambience that has a sparkling image of love and endearment, this
is sentimental as well as capturing the embracing moment, poetry
to light any woman's heart on fire, sensual and passionate, Excellent, mike

[An Ordinary Woman]

Ohhhh, I love this .... "Standing side by side Watching aspens sway," ... gorgeous, Phil!!

Going off to sleep
Every night as one
Then to have the pleasure
To wake up with the sun .... Very nice indeed :+)

[Candle in the wind]

The tenderness of sharing love shines through thsi this brief yet sensitive poem.I like the simplicity and transparency of your writing.